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Literature Text
Seeing
Hearing
Feeling
Falling
Loving
Loving
Loving
Hurting
Crushing
Breaking
Yelling
Beating?
Beating?
Beating?
Pulsing
Bleeding
Crashing
Dying
Forever stone cold.
Hearing
Feeling
Falling
Loving
Loving
Loving
Hurting
Crushing
Breaking
Yelling
Beating?
Beating?
Beating?
Pulsing
Bleeding
Crashing
Dying
Forever stone cold.
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As a spoken word piece I can see how impactful this would be. As written word, I am left searching for symbols where there are none?
I think the last line might be better as one word also, but I don't know how attached you are to it.
Very strong though. Very strong indeed.
I think the last line might be better as one word also, but I don't know how attached you are to it.
Very strong though. Very strong indeed.